I am a student at Ōtaki College in Ōtaki, NZ. My blog is a place where I will be able to share some of my learning. Please note....some work won't be edited - they are just my first drafts, so there may be some errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas on my posts.
Kia ora. I am Azra from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked your animation that you done. I have also made an animation. Maybe you could make it a little bit longer. Please visit my blog here
Kia ora. I am kingston from Gisborne Intermediate School. I really liked how they all just crashed at the end Did you think about adding a bit more effort. Maybe you could add a little bit more time into it Please visit my blog here
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ReplyDeleteHi Tairua
ReplyDeletei liked your animation and how your cars moved at the same time but maybe next time put some faces in the cars.
from niko.
Kia ora. I am Azra from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked your animation that you done.
I have also made an animation.
Maybe you could make it a little bit longer.
Please visit my blog
here
Mā te wā
Azra
Kia ora. I am kingston from Gisborne Intermediate School.
ReplyDeleteI really liked how they all just crashed at the end
Did you think about adding a bit more effort.
Maybe you could add a little bit more time into it
Please visit my blog
here
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